Anyone
could tell you that physical health is an extremely important aspect of a
person’s life. We hear a lot about weight, weight-loss, eating healthy, 60
minutes of exercise, etc. but many people are completely misinformed about what
exactly is healthy. A common misconception—specifically in America—is that you
need an excessive amount of protein. While it’s true that protein is an important
nutrient, we do not need nearly as much as people think. Americans eat nearly
6% more protein than we actually need. Because of our misconceptions about
protein, many people think that vegetarianism, and even veganism, are both
harmful to the body. However, there are many ways to get the proper amount of
protein from a vegetarian diet. Meat is not essential. We can get the proper
amount of protein from nuts, soya, dry lentils, and more. Plus, not eating meat
could help cut down on the overdose of protein that most of us are taking in.
Protein isn’t the only nutrient that people think you can’t get from being
vegetarian/vegan, but that just doesn’t make sense. Many of the nutrients
people get in their diets come from fruits and vegetable or we can get those
nutrients from fruits and vegetables—or raw food based products.
Not only
are vegetarianism and veganism just as healthy—if not more so—in terms of
nutrients, they are healthier in terms of fats and sodium. Meat and dairy have
a significant amount of fat. Think about this: milk was MADE by the cow to turn
a 60 lb. calf into a 1,600 lb cow. And people are wondering why they’re gaining
weight as they drink milk… As well, red meat is known to cause a significant
number of health problems, but we continue to eat it.
Speaking
of eating meat, things like hot dogs and sausage should be illegal. They are
all the discarded parts of an animal that aren’t used for the normal meats.
I think you have a really good topic for your editorial! You definitely have a clear argument which is awesome. I think that you might want to make it a little more formal and a little longer. To make it longer, you might want to add a little more to the end and expand on why you think that hot dogs and sausage should be illegal, it's a little brief right now. You might also want to end with something more about health, like you started.
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